I think what gives us strength is constancy..family,friends,work as our identity..it defines us and keeps us grounded. But often we forget how non-permanent these are. The moment you clasp onto something and begin to believe that it would last, it slips out of your fingers. So I get quite sentimental as I write the last piece for Trifecta– it made me a writer but most of all, made me believe I am a writer.
So the last challenge is this:
For the final challenge here at Trifecta, we considered some flash and dazzle, a wild prompt to send us off with a bang. What we realized was the most achingly beautiful, haunting and dazzling words we’ve read from our brilliant community have been the ones you chose when you were given the freedom to write with abandon. So we’re lovingly, and eagerly, placing the choice in your hands. There’s no topic, no word, just a free write. Go anywhere your mind wants to travel. Take us there too. Just make it count, leave your blood all over this page. Thirty-three words exactly. Of course. We couldn’t end it any other way.
dazzling in the sunlight
born from a fight
butterflies
We change and adapt
Adjust and make room for metamorphosis
fragile and delicate
butterflies
But when you hold onto it
It turns lifeless.
What a great metaphor! Those first three lines in particular are really a wonderful image.
So powerful – i can feel the punch to my gut. Really great piece.
Ah, but the beauty of the chase… Nice one!
simply love the last bit!
A poignant end. Best of luck for the future!
A lovely analogy and a sweet tribute!
I got a little choked up reading your intro. The butterfly is a great comparison. Much in life is transient, but like the butterfly, we must let it go.
Someone beat me to the punch with the ‘punch to the gut’ line. We are honored to have played a small role in your journey. Thank you for sharing with us.
You’re right, sometimes you just have to let go in order to continue to live.
believe
No matter how hard it is, you have to let it go sometimes.
I love the end ❤